After getting my result for this essay I had the greatest confidence to write more essays. At that time I feel like I can right essay in ease. I know you guys are probably like STFU we don't care about this and stop making a big deal out of this, well to me personally I think it's great so you STFU lol.
For those that are wondering why my essays in my previous high school was crap, was because my grammar primarily. Well that previous school I was in wasn't that great too. Anyway here is my essay: (This is copied and pasted from my one drive)
Sharing my essay was inspired by Ben H.
(PS: I wrote a BS essay. Nowadays it is common to BS writing assignments.)